A mysterious box is delivered....
RO: Last Saturday started like any other. I forced myself to work out and embarked on the endless round of minor chores which alway seem to need doing - dropping off at Goodwill, heading to the hardware store and dry cleaners and then I let myself get happily sidetracked by a tag sale.
When I got home, there was a cardboard box on my doorstep, about three feet by one and a half feet. Scribbled on the box in blue magic marker were the words "these are the plans for your house. I thought you might like them."
I should back up a bit and say that my husband and I never met the woman who sold us our house fifteen years ago. The house wasn't even for sale but my husband fell in love with it one day as he was jogging and dragged me back to see it. I was convinced we'd get arrested for trespassing, but we didn't. Anyway, the owner's brother orchestrated the sale for his sister who by all accounts was a colorful, i.e., eccentric character.
And now we have this box of plans and blueprints dating back to 1948. Some of them are very cool and show the house before its numerous additions. Others show proposed changes in the 80's which never materialized but are amazingly close to things my husband and I are considering doing.
I haven't gone through the whole box yet - there are dozens of plans. What if there is an underground room I don't about? A secret panel in the basement? Something that was razed for unknown reasons... hmmm, so what think? Should I scrap the beginning of the as yet unnamed book four which takes place at a flower show and write this story instead? Where would you take this story?
JAN: I don't know, I'm intrigued by murder at the flower show -- but if I were going to write this one, there would definitely be a secret underground room with both dead bones and a LOT of money in it.
HANK: Misdirection. That's the key. After much searching and speculating, the plans are nothing. But! There's something written on the back of the plans. Or! One of the pages is mistakenly mixed in from somewhere else. And THAT takes her to the real mystery.
RO: Ooohh, you gals sound like mystery writers. I took a writing class with Stuart Kaminsky once and he started us off with a story line and we each had five minutes to sketch out what happened next. So, JR readers..you find a mysterious box of house plans on your doorstep with a cryptic note. What happens next? At the end of the week, I will pick my favorite story line from JR's readers and send the winner a signed copy of The Big Dirt Nap.
Hallopalooza Winners...
canyonson - Royal Flush, Rhys Bowen
DarcyO - Prime Time, Hank Phillippi Ryan
Helen Kiker - A Confidential Source, Jan Brogan
Librarymom - Preaching to the Corpse, Roberta Isleib
Riss - Bibliophile's Devotional, Hallie Ephron
Penny Tuttle - Pushing Up Daisies, Rosemary Harris
Winners should contact the author whose book they've won by ckicking on our pictures above and visiting our website. Congrats and thanks for playing!!
Winners should contact the author whose book they've won by ckicking on our pictures above and visiting our website. Congrats and thanks for playing!!
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