LUCY BURDETTE: I admire writers who manage to block out an entire plot before they begin writing. I am not one of them. I have a premise at the beginning, hopefully a good one, and an idea of my characters’ directions. Then I start in. You might remember that five of us Reds have been chatting behind the scenes to share our writing progress. This has been so helpful even if it’s demoralizing when my total word count is zero. It keeps me moving forward when I might otherwise become hopelessly distracted.
A couple of weeks ago, I told these Reds that I finally figured out why I didn’t know who had committed the murder in book 16. I didn’t know enough about the suspects to understand who would really be capable of such a crime and why. Obvious right? But it felt like a breakthrough! That’s my process. Write and then think, write and think. This book (still untitled) is due September 1. I am probably 5/7 of the way through, and quite pleased with how it’s turning out. Here’s a tiny snippet from a second attack that takes place outside a daycare. (Now that I’ve written this, I’ll need to figure out what really happened.)
The night darkness was streaked with flashing blue and red lights, from four police vehicles and an ambulance. The multicolored dancing children painted on the outside cement wall were warped into distorted and throbbing figures by the strobe lights on the cars.
A gaggle of onlookers had gathered and were being pushed back to the edge of the property by officers, one of them Danielle's husband Jeremy. I struggled out of the back seat and wove through the crowd to get closer to him.
“Jeremy,” I hissed, waving him toward me. “Can you tell me what’s going on?”
He rolled his eyes as if to say I surely knew better but moved over to speak to me anyway. “From what I can tell, one of the employees from Toddlers and Tots was shot.” He pointed to a still form on the front lawn, covered with a foil blanket and surrounded by rescue workers. Several of them had dropped to their knees to tend to the victim. Police officers were interviewing a woman near the entrance to the building. “That’s Alice Mayhill, the owner. She called it in, after she heard noises in the yard, then what she believed to be a gunshot. She lives upstairs.”
“Have any suspects been apprehended?” asked Damian, who was now standing behind me. He placed a protective hand on my shoulder.
“None so far,” said Jeremy. One of the other officers began yelling for him. “Gotta go.”
“Miss Gloria probably knows more about this from listening to her police scanner than Jeremy does standing right in the thick of things,” I muttered.
Meanwhile, I’m working to set up promotion for THE MANGO MURDERS, arriving in bookstores near you on August 12. There will be a grand book launch at RJ Julia‘s in Madison CT on August 12 at 6:30 with cake, wine, and door prizes. This book party is kind of special because it celebrates novel number 25!
I still remember my very first book event for SIX STROKES UNDER back in 2002. I told everyone I knew about it. We had so many people sign up that it had to be moved from the bookstore to the library.
I certainly had no idea where the writing journey would take me, but
I’m so glad to be here with all of you.
What turn or outcome in your life has surprised you?
The surprising outcome is that I never married nor had children.
ReplyDeletethat's a big one. had you always thought you would?
DeleteOkay . . . now I'm intrigued and want to know who is shooting people outside a daycare. Thanks for sharing this with us, Lucy . . . I'm looking forward to reading the rest of the story!
ReplyDeleteAs for being surprised by outcomes . . . I am constantly surprised because things never quite turn out the way I expect them to . . . .
I am surprised that this workalholic enjoyed early retirement so much!
ReplyDeleteAnd why am I still such an early riser? I no longer have to commute 1.5 hours each way to get to work by 7:00 am, lol.
I still get up early, now that I'm retired as well
DeleteGood one Grace. That would be surprising! I think I get up pretty early too, but you guys always beat me:)
DeleteI know two retirees who still get up at 4:30am without an alarm clock. I am not one of them. I do get up plenty early for me to get to pickleball MWF at 7am and a little later for water aerobics T-Th and 8 am church on Sundays….but I have to set an alarm and drag myself out of bed. I treasure Saturdays for sleeping in.
DeleteThanks for sharing the excerpt, the final Mango Murders cover, and photos of you as a live and dead golfer. My favorite photo: the Key West police car that says "Protecting and Serving Paradise." Key Westers definitely know they are special. As for surprising outcomes, I never expected to marry my Swiss husband, move to Switzerland, become a Swiss, and settle in Bern, and I never expected to write and publish a fiction book after the age of 60, let alone four books and counting.
ReplyDeleteYes Key West knows it's special! Although we are struggling with ugly politics right now, like the rest of the US...Kim you are full of surprises!
DeleteThanks for the snippet, now I'm intrigued.
ReplyDeleteAs for being surprised by outcomes, I never expected to co-write a short story (with Kristopher Zgorski) and win an Agatha, Anthony, and the Macavity awards.
Fantastic surprise Dru, and I hope you're writing another!
DeleteI love the golf photos! Enjoy your launch party for Mango Murders. That book is going to sell well just from the cover alone. It is so eye-catching!
ReplyDeleteI never expected to pick up and move to Florida after 40 years in Minnesota and my whole life in the Midwest. My husband is still full of surprises I guess.
that's a big change! hope you're happy with your new life:)
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