LUCY BURDETTE: At the end of my 15th Key West food critic mystery, THE MANGO MURDERS, my food critic sleuth Hayley Snow turns up pregnant. I hadn’t planned this, and to be fair, neither had she. But I had the sneaking suspicion that this book would be the end of the series. If it was, what better way to go out with a flourish than with the happy news of an upcoming baby? Except, it turned out, the series didn’t end and now I was weighted down by a pregnant sleuth. Oof.
As I began writing the 16th book, A DELICIOUS DECEPTION, Hayley is struggling through the ninth month of her pregnancy. She feels the loss of her autonomy, her usual spunk, and her privacy. Everybody has an opinion about what a very pregnant sleuth should be doing, beginning very emphatically with her protective police officer husband, Nathan. Hayley is known for being hot-headed and independent, but that only goes so far as a reasonable explanation in this situation. I had to work hard to give her a case that pulled so hard on her sense of justice that it would overcome her physical and psychological worries. I hope I did her justice!
Reds, it’s a sticky wicket; it’s a natural progression for a young woman to want a family, but this makes it hard on the author. What have you learned by writing your pregnant sleuths, or why did you decide to skip this milestone?
RHYS BOWEN: I can’t tell you how many times I’ve asked myself ‘what was I thinking’ when I got my heroines pregnant? The problem is that writing about young women in the past, when they fell in love and got married there was no birth control or at least they didn’t know about it. So pregnancies were inevitable. I remember the book in which Molly Murphy has to flee to Paris with her new baby and then has a horrible mystery to solve concerning her two friends there and every four hours she has to rush home to nurse that baby.
The problem with having a female sleuth who is also a new mother is that I have to ask myself all the time, would I put myself into danger if I was responsible for someone else’s life? And so most of Molly‘s cases since she had her first child have been ones that concerned her, her family or close friends, and which she had a moral obligation to help solve.
At least Lady Georgie has it slightly easier as she has a nanny. Not that that was always a good thing but now she can relax a little knowing her child is in good hands.
So my advice would be if you consider giving your heroin either a baby or a dog – don’t. Readers will write and tell you if you haven’t fed the dog for 10 pages. I will certainly notice if you’ve left the baby lying in a crib for three chapters.
JULIA SPENCER-FLEMING: I decided my co-sleuth, Clare Fergusson, would get pregnant because I wanted to explore the dynamics between her and her brand-new husband, who had agreed with her they WOULDN'T have any children. It added interesting layers to her character - she was always reckless, and had to deal with the fact anything that might happen to her would also affect her unborn child. There are, of course, the physical challenges of going after bad guys when your center of gravity has shifted and it's hard to bend over! The biggest and most dynamic change was the way others saw her - a visible pregnancy makes some observers more protective, and some willing to take advantage of her supposed vulnerability.
At the end, the real challenge of having a pregnant sleuth, as in real life, comes AFTER the baby is born and you have to deal with it!
HANK PHILLIPPI RYAN: Yeah, my heroines are not pregnant. They often have children, though, their own kids but young, or a child-adjacent character like a niece. As you say, Julia, after the child is born brings its own set of challenges (like they keep needing to EAT, for gosh sake, and they can’t even DRIVE) but that’s for another blog.
HALLIE EPHRON: There’s a reason Raymond Chandler quipped: “A really good detective never gets married.” Oy, the complications of child care. Pregnancy complicates things even further. But what fun, giving your sleuth problems!!
I did it with my first standalone, NEVER TELL A LIE. Domestic suspense, of course, my sweet spot. And Ivy Rose is 9-months pregnant when a woman from her past drops in on her yard sale (Ivy is nesting!) and turns her world upside down. (Pregnant Ivy muses “A fullly pregnant belly was pretty astonishing. Right up there with a prizewinning Hubbard squash.”)
The stakes are as enormous as the sleuth’s belly.
JENN McKINLAY: LOL, Hallie! Personally, I couldn’t write about a pregnant amateur sleuth and thus opted out of doing so. I couldn’t suspend my disbelief enough to accept that a pregnant woman or the people who love her would be okay if she and the baby were put in harm’s way because she’s nosy. It's different if she's a cop/detective where it's her job, baby or not. That being said, If anyone can pull it off, Lucy, you can! Can’t wait to read it. I did end the cupcake series with a pregnant main character but my plan if I’d written another one was to have her staff take over the sleuthy part–rather like Archie Goodwin helps Nero Wolfe (leaving him to tend his orchid babies).
DEBORAH CROMBIE: When I first started my series I gave Gemma, then a single mum, a two-year-old. I knew I wanted to write about women in the job (policing) dealing with the things real women deal with, like juggling work and child care. Then a few books later, Gemma gets pregnant and it really upsets her new-found stability. Unfortunately, she loses that baby six months into the pregnancy, possibly due to a violent encounter with a villain, and it’s very difficult for her to regroup.
But I still think a pregnant sleuth, amateur or professional, makes for great plot opportunities, and I think Rhys and Julia and Hallie have handled it really well. Lucy, I can’t wait to see how Hailey manages!
RED READERS, please weigh in with your thoughts on the pregnant sleuth. Do you enjoy this life twist in your mysteries? Why or why not?
You’ll be able to read about Hayley’s adventures in this delicate condition beginning July 14. Please pre-order here!


















Although babies tend to complicate sleuthing, I love Little Ones in the story and think that having our favorite sleuths pregnant makes for a great story . . . . and now, Lucy, I'm anxiously looking forward to seeing how Hailey manages everything!
ReplyDeletethanks Joan, fingers crossed she's a good parent:)
DeleteGreat topic. In my thirteenth Country Store mystery, Robbie Jordan is also nine months pregnant (and in the book before that she's in her first trimester and has to upchuck in the bushes a couple of times ). I made sure she was very careful even while sleuthing, and she gives birth in a horrible thunderstorm at the end of the book. I knew I was ending that series and that way I didn't have to deal with the baby.
ReplyDeleteIn the Cozy Capers series, Mac and Tim haven't succeeded in conceiving, but then his sister dies and they adopt the baby and the toddler - instant parents! But they share the parenting equally, and Mac's family steps in to help, too, so she manages to get her sleuthing done.
I also should add my congratulations on the new book, Lucy, and that I'm looking forward as always to catching up with Hayley! My copy is preordered from Jabberwocky Books.
DeleteDidn’t your Quaker midwife have a baby at the end of the series? It has been a while since I’ve read Quaker midwife.
DeleteDiana
Oh my goodness, how could I forget that? Thank you, Diana, for reminding me that midwife Rose gives birth to her own first child at the end of book #7, A Changing Light. She also needed to be careful of her safety in her ninth month.
DeleteLove hearing about all your babies Edith! After reading where and how Paula Munier's Mercy Carr gave birth, I figured nothing I would write could be harder on Hayley.
DeleteI love when writers let their amateur and real detectives have real lives, boy friends, weddings and children. Debs has been masterful at filling the Kinkaid/James household with children and pets. I was devastated when Gemma lost her baby but you have given her and Duncan plenty of family to juggle and that is why they feel so very real!
ReplyDeleteRhys, I remember you writing about how difficult it was to send Molly to Paris with a newborn. But Molly wants a family and so does Daniel. There is no logical reason for that not to be on-going other than how hard it is to plot around it. And speaking of masterful, Nanny Hardbottle! Brilliant! Georgie grows before our eyes. I knew she had it in her!
Lucy, I am very excited to see how you handle Hayley's delicate condition. She you at the party!
thanks Judy, so glad you approve of all the families growing. I look forward to seeing you!!
DeleteWow! Not only pregnant but the idea of having to deal with hormones during the and working as a sleuth.
ReplyDeleteThinking of the pregnant sleuth, I had forgotten about this part. Now that I’m reminded, I recall some of the sleuths were pregnant. I thought perhaps it meant the end of a series. I recall when Rhys’ Constable Evans got married, it was the end of the series? Lucy, I’m thinking of a pregnant Hayley and I think she has a village in close friends who can help with the baby.
No idea why I was reminded of Caroline Graham, author of Midsomer Murders. She decided she wanted her detective to be happily married and she created Tom Barnaby. She didn’t want another detective who is divorced with multiple former wives.
Diana
Diana, yes, Hayley definitely has a village and will use them all!
DeleteLucy, congrats on your upcoming release. I do like seeing little ones in the story and if it is done right, no harm comes to the little ones or the amateur sleuth.
ReplyDeleteOh no Dru, that would be horrible!!
DeleteHaving a sleuth be pregnant definitely complicates the narrative of any book where they are still pregnant. Because the cautious side of the reader does indeed wonder why they would put not just themselves (as usual) in danger but the unborn life as well. I shocked some town busybody doesn't call DCFS and complain about the sleuth's actions.
ReplyDeleteChild-free detectives sure make things easier, but since we insist on allowing pets I think we have to continue to accept that love and/or marriage will inevitably head towards the baby in a carriage direction.
NOTE TO SELF: When you write your threatened mystery novel, have the character be male, keep no pets and figure out how to hook him up only with women who can't have kids. Then you just have to worry about the insane murderer and them dropping a body every 10 pages. Life will be so much easier.
Ha ha Jay, get busy on that book and we will read it!
DeleteAgree with Lucy here. Write your novel and we will read it.
DeleteDiana
Lucy, I was happy to know that Haley, and Nathan, Miss Floria et al. are continuing! Adding a baby, or child just adds a new wrinkle (in more ways than one) and can be fun to watch. My copy is preordered from The Silver Unicorn.
ReplyDeletethanks so much Suzette!
DeleteSince I'm childless by choice, my series sleuths (Lady Appleton, Liss MacCrimmon, Diana Spaulding, Mikki Lincoln, and Rosamond Jaffrey) are too, although Lady Appleton is Rosamond's foster mother. For reading, though, I enjoy the complications added by dealing with motherhood while detecting. Elizabeth Peters' child to adult arc with the character of Ramses is one of my favorites.
ReplyDeleteSo glad to hear that Kathy!
DeleteOh, so happy that the series didn't end with H being "with child". It will be interesting to read how she manages to cope as most of her sleuthing is unplanned and spur of the moment.
ReplyDeleteIt's not going to be easy for any of us, LOL!
DeleteCongratulations on the new book, Lucy! I am confident you will succeed at working around the pregnancy and eventually be delighted with the new character you are able to introduce.
ReplyDeleteI am a big fan of mystery series that feature a thriving, ongoing home life, like Deb's and Julia's. To me, it elevates the overall writing and proves that a mystery is just as much "literature" as any other novel. I think this would be hard to accomplish in a single mystery, but for an ongoing series I think it is great.
Though in general I am a big fan of Jacqueline Winspear, I was really annoyed when she ended Maisie's first marriage and pregnancy "offscreen" between one book and the next. It really gave me the sense of the author having written herself into a corner. And Elizabeth George...well, need I say more?
Totally agree with you about Winspear and George, although I managed to re-engage with Maisie Dobbs after her tragedy.
DeleteSo did I, Gillian. She recovered well from that one misstep. I continued with Elizabeth George for a while after, too, but I ultimately decided that she only knows how to write about protagonists who are miserable, and thus felt the need to torture her main characters more than I could stomach.
DeletePerhaps unpopular opinion here though I think it fits in with Maisie’s personality. As I recall, the end of Maisie’s marriage and pregnancy are told in flashbacks. And relatives loved Elizabeth George until she killed off the love interest of Lynley then they stopped reading her books.
DeleteDiana
So interesting to hear your comments on those series. I haven't read far enough in either to weigh in.
DeleteI guessed early in The Mango Murders that Hayley was pregnant and was happy to be proved right, Congratulations on the new book! I'm a big fan of detectives having families, home life, and relaxation I won't get bored if Hayley or another sleuth has to go home and feed the baby. Perhaps a different character could be in danger for a book or two.
ReplyDeleteJust not poor Miss Gloria, right??
DeleteCongratulations, Lucy! You must have one of the longest running and most successful series in publishing – – that is so fabulous! Cannot wait to read this new one.
ReplyDeleteAnd I agree this is a great and fascinating topic – – because when a sleuth is pregnant, readers become even more watchful and even critical of what the character does. The pregnancy hangs over everything they do.
Hank, you are right about readers watching every move, but that is the case when anything happens to the detective or a family member. Julia, remember when Ross broke his ankle. Well he couldn't use it and it complicated things. Debs, Duncan was injured in an automobile accident. He was hurting. Readers are tuned in to those complications.
DeleteBut writers, if you forget to feed your dog, I know you've never owned one and I doubt that I'll read any more books in that series.
It's funny looking at advance reviews--readers new to the series don't love the complications in this book, but familiar readers understand Hayley and Nathan's personalities.
DeleteSince we readers are there for the trials and tribulations of love and courtship, I think most of us happily anticipate a growing family. The scene where Hayley and Nathan individually find out she's pregnant is hilarious! Like in real life, some heroines are meant for motherhood, others are not. Both are good. I just finished an ARC of A Delicious Deception and it was perfect!
ReplyDeletethanks so very much Pat, I appreciate that!
DeleteI have always wondered how do authors pick names for their main characters - and I can't wait to find out what name Haley and Nathan pick out.
ReplyDeleteI loved reading about the main characters in Harry Potter growing up from young teens to adults to married to parents.
DeleteI won't spoil it by telling you ahead:). Love the comparison to Harry Potter!
DeleteI published a short story in a 2017 eclipse anthology about pregnant women during the solar eclipse. Fun!
ReplyDeletethat sounds interesting!
DeleteMy woman police detective, Giuliana Linder, already has a 10- and a 15-year-old in the first book of the series. (NO danger of a pregnancy!) I gave her a freelance writer as a husband who has always had the primary responsibility for childcare (I never explained how she managed to nurse the babies!). I wanted to make things realistic, and I knew she'd never be able to handle her job properly if she had to worry about her kids' daily lives. I love reading about children in fiction as long as they aren't too offensively precocious and mouthy. Debs, Gemma, Duncan, and their kids were good models!
ReplyDeleteYes Debs is a good role model for all of us!
DeleteSorry, I've been MIA this week! Our AC went out on Monday and it's taken me a bit to regroup! Such a fascinating question, Lucy. I'm so looking forward to reading A Delicious Deception! I think being a grandma sleuth would be the best of all world's -- kids are around but no longer your pain problem as a murderer is! LOL.
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