LUCY BURDETTE: I admire writers who manage to block out an entire plot before they begin writing. I am not one of them. I have a premise at the beginning, hopefully a good one, and an idea of my characters’ directions. Then I start in. You might remember that five of us Reds have been chatting behind the scenes to share our writing progress. This has been so helpful even if it’s demoralizing when my total word count is zero. It keeps me moving forward when I might otherwise become hopelessly distracted.
A couple of weeks ago, I told these Reds that I finally figured out why I didn’t know who had committed the murder in book 16. I didn’t know enough about the suspects to understand who would really be capable of such a crime and why. Obvious right? But it felt like a breakthrough! That’s my process. Write and then think, write and think. This book (still untitled) is due September 1. I am probably 5/7 of the way through, and quite pleased with how it’s turning out. Here’s a tiny snippet from a second attack that takes place outside a daycare. (Now that I’ve written this, I’ll need to figure out what really happened.)
The night darkness was streaked with flashing blue and red lights, from four police vehicles and an ambulance. The multicolored dancing children painted on the outside cement wall were warped into distorted and throbbing figures by the strobe lights on the cars.
A gaggle of onlookers had gathered and were being pushed back to the edge of the property by officers, one of them Danielle's husband Jeremy. I struggled out of the back seat and wove through the crowd to get closer to him.
“Jeremy,” I hissed, waving him toward me. “Can you tell me what’s going on?”
He rolled his eyes as if to say I surely knew better but moved over to speak to me anyway. “From what I can tell, one of the employees from Toddlers and Tots was shot.” He pointed to a still form on the front lawn, covered with a foil blanket and surrounded by rescue workers. Several of them had dropped to their knees to tend to the victim. Police officers were interviewing a woman near the entrance to the building. “That’s Alice Mayhill, the owner. She called it in, after she heard noises in the yard, then what she believed to be a gunshot. She lives upstairs.”
“Have any suspects been apprehended?” asked Damian, who was now standing behind me. He placed a protective hand on my shoulder.
“None so far,” said Jeremy. One of the other officers began yelling for him. “Gotta go.”
“Miss Gloria probably knows more about this from listening to her police scanner than Jeremy does standing right in the thick of things,” I muttered.
Meanwhile, I’m working to set up promotion for THE MANGO MURDERS, arriving in bookstores near you on August 12. There will be a grand book launch at RJ Julia‘s in Madison CT on August 12 at 6:30 with cake, wine, and door prizes. This book party is kind of special because it celebrates novel number 25!
I still remember my very first book event for SIX STROKES UNDER back in 2002. I told everyone I knew about it. We had so many people sign up that it had to be moved from the bookstore to the library.
I certainly had no idea where the writing journey would take me, but
I’m so glad to be here with all of you.
What turn or outcome in your life has surprised you?
The surprising outcome is that I never married nor had children.
ReplyDeletethat's a big one. had you always thought you would?
DeleteOkay . . . now I'm intrigued and want to know who is shooting people outside a daycare. Thanks for sharing this with us, Lucy . . . I'm looking forward to reading the rest of the story!
ReplyDeleteAs for being surprised by outcomes . . . I am constantly surprised because things never quite turn out the way I expect them to . . . .
I am surprised that this workalholic enjoyed early retirement so much!
ReplyDeleteAnd why am I still such an early riser? I no longer have to commute 1.5 hours each way to get to work by 7:00 am, lol.
I still get up early, now that I'm retired as well
DeleteGood one Grace. That would be surprising! I think I get up pretty early too, but you guys always beat me:)
DeleteI know two retirees who still get up at 4:30am without an alarm clock. I am not one of them. I do get up plenty early for me to get to pickleball MWF at 7am and a little later for water aerobics T-Th and 8 am church on Sundays….but I have to set an alarm and drag myself out of bed. I treasure Saturdays for sleeping in.
DeleteDRU: You have always been an early riser, up even before me!
DeleteBut you are also a new retiree, so maybe you will modify your daily wake-up to a later time.
Hi ya ~ Paula B here. I’m not surprised I’m still getting up early. I was warned. I’m surprised that I enjoy it. It’s so amazing. Who knew!
DeleteGRACE: More time to read wonderful books, right?
Deleteat this point I don't think I could 'sleep in' with a gun to my head!
DeleteDIANA: One downside to waking up so early is that I miss watching live virtual events in the evening on the West Coast. I am asleep by 10 pm Eastern time!
DeleteThanks for sharing the excerpt, the final Mango Murders cover, and photos of you as a live and dead golfer. My favorite photo: the Key West police car that says "Protecting and Serving Paradise." Key Westers definitely know they are special. As for surprising outcomes, I never expected to marry my Swiss husband, move to Switzerland, become a Swiss, and settle in Bern, and I never expected to write and publish a fiction book after the age of 60, let alone four books and counting.
ReplyDeleteYes Key West knows it's special! Although we are struggling with ugly politics right now, like the rest of the US...Kim you are full of surprises!
DeleteLucy do you mean ugly politics in Key West? That would be a shame.
DeleteYes, ICE showing up to sweep workers away, graft and corruption in the city government, it's heartbreaking.
DeleteThanks for the snippet, now I'm intrigued.
ReplyDeleteAs for being surprised by outcomes, I never expected to co-write a short story (with Kristopher Zgorski) and win an Agatha, Anthony, and the Macavity awards.
Fantastic surprise Dru, and I hope you're writing another!
DeleteI love the golf photos! Enjoy your launch party for Mango Murders. That book is going to sell well just from the cover alone. It is so eye-catching!
ReplyDeleteI never expected to pick up and move to Florida after 40 years in Minnesota and my whole life in the Midwest. My husband is still full of surprises I guess.
that's a big change! hope you're happy with your new life:)
DeleteWe live in a 55+ community and are always going and doing. I was basically becoming a hermit in Minnesota in the winter so this has been a good change for us.
DeleteWhat a ride, Lucy! Congratulations on Book 25! I don't know how you all do it, over and over.
ReplyDeleteHaving just two published books (and dozens of articles, short books, and a dozen different talks) was not something I could have foreseen. I remember vividly having so much anxiety over the need to merely write my own business letters in my early 20's!
The other surprise is to have three daughters, but only a single grandchild. I guess the amazing part of the situation is that women have such choice in how they live their lives today, or at least up to now. I could not have predicted the paths they have each chosen, or how much further they would go in life than either of their parents ever have. It's exciting to see, not just in our own children, but our friends' kids, too.
Your daughters' lives sound like such a good surprise Karen!
DeleteI plan to be at your launch party on August 12, Roberta! The bbok is reserved and they know I am coming! I called RJ Julia to order the book and reserve a seat as soon as you told us what and when, apparently very early in the process. The employee who answered the phone asked me to call again when she had all the information in a month or two! Lol
ReplyDeleteI never expected to be a regular visitor to a blog written by 7 fabulous authors, to meet countless other authors and book lovers, and to feel a part of a community like this one, so late in my life.
Welcome back, Judy! Hope you had a wonderful time on your trip.
DeleteThanks, Karen and everyone who sent welcome messages yesterday. We had a great time, although Irwin has had enough ruins to last for a lifetime! Greece is beautiful and the Greek Islands are gorgeous. The cruise was great! I am glad I dieted before we left, and starting today, the healthy eating is back on schedule. I did read a bit but not as much as I thought I would. With all the books coming and the ones already piled up, I intend to spend some hours each day catching up.
DeleteWe're so glad you're a part of JRW Judy, and I'm honored that you'll be at the book launch!
DeleteJudy, you are always a brights spot in my day. Give Lucy Roberta a hug for me too
DeleteI will gladly do that, Ann.
DeleteHi Lucy, thanks for the excerpt and congratulations on your surprising ride.
ReplyDeleteIt's 5 am here and I just woke up from a dream where I was in my 40s and wanting a baby. I felt confused when I woke up in my late 60s with an adult son and no ability to have more kids.
My life has taken me in a number of unexpected directions, starting with the surprise pregnancy. I didn't think I would be a church person and now it's an important part of my life. I wouldn't have predicted that I would have friends from many parts of Latin America and that their safety and well-being would be so important to me.
What a dream Gillian! I missed a plane this morning in my dream--it was thirty minutes before take off and I hadn't even left the house...
DeleteA little bit of anxiety there, Roberta!!
Deletecongratulations, Lucy! This is an absolutely amazing accomplishment! Standing ovation.
ReplyDeleteAs for expectations – – wow, you really have me thinking, and I I have to say it’s my entire life. My entire life and everything about it is a surprise, and continues to be so. Every day.
You surprise us too every day Hank! did you tell the Reds you interviewed Stacy Abrams yesterday??
DeleteLUCY: Congratulations and thanks for the snippet! Like Hank, your question got me thinking and I have to say that my entire life and everything abut it is a surprise and continue to be so. Every day, to borrow Hank's quote.
ReplyDeletethanks Diana, and may your surprises be good ones!
DeleteLucy, I love those early golf photos--so much joy in your accomplishment is evident! And look at you now--25 and counting! Thanks for the snippet (I'm betting on Miss Gloria to have the scoop!).
ReplyDeleteWith graduate school under my belt, an established career (balancing complex cultural resource investigations and two specialized labs), I never expected to find myself reorganized out of a job and starting over. That pause gave me the opportunity to help out a younger brother recently divorced with two babies 11 months apart. I never expected that role to last 25+ years!
wow that's a huge change Flora!!
DeleteI was a childless 44-year-old without even a cat (being on the road made pets hard). I worked part-time until they started school, then went back to work in my field full-time. Happily retired from my field now. :-)
DeleteThese two babies are blessed to have you in their lives. Thank you for helping your brother. Congratulations on completing graduate school and establishing a career.
DeleteThank goodness I'm not the only one who starts with an idea, characters and premise, and then starts writing. I tried the outline thing--I really did. And darn it if my characters went off and did something entirely different!! As for unexpected turns--I think that's called life!! Thanks for the unexpected bright spot in my day Lucy.
ReplyDeletethat's so sweet, thank you
DeleteCongratulations on #25! Quite an accomplishment. As for unexpected changes in life, I'd say I never expected to find such joy in living in my car. I thought it would be horrid, but instead I have found more peace and joy than I'd ever experienced to date. Interesting the revelations life brings us, isn't it? -- Victoria
ReplyDeleteYou are one of a kind! You'll have to write a blog for us one day...
DeleteWell done Lucy Roberta. I’m in awe of you and all you’ve accomplished in your life.
ReplyDeleteUnexpected turns in life? For me there are too many to remember, some good and some bad. But so far things have turned out for the best. If I hadn’t had that TIA in January, who knows when the spot on my lung would have been found?
Now I’m sitting here with my Covid pup on my lap and thinking how you and I and Lori R-D all adopted these angels at the same time.
Ann, I hope they found the spot early. Wishing you many years of good health to spend with your Covid pup! — Pat S
DeleteThanks Pat
DeleteWishing you well, Ann! Keep posting those photos of flowers and pups--love seeing them!
DeleteWe are all wishing you so much good health Ann! I love sharing the puppies with you and Lori, although at the time Lottie nearly killed us:). We went on a new walk route today and ran into a dog who was in Lottie's first puppy class. The woman recognized Lottie right away!
DeleteThinking of you, Ann!! xx
DeleteAnn, sending many wishes for good health.
DeleteLike Judy, I never expected to even follow a blog, let alone become a commenter! Because of this blog, I have met a few people who have become friends. One of those friends, Grace, gave me an opportunity this past March to do something I never, ever thought I would have the chance, let alone the guts to do - appear on a panel at a conference! And that I enjoyed it and managed to acquit myself respectably is even more of a shock! — Pat S
ReplyDeleteGood for you, Pat S.!
DeleteThat's wonderful Pat! Remind us what the panel was about?
DeleteLUCY: It was the Readers Panel at Denver Left Coast Crime (LCC). As Fan GOH, I got to choose what type of panel I wanted to be on. We all talked about what books we read as kids, which types of books we like reading, and gave book recommendations about what we are reading now.
DeleteCongratulations, Lucy! I never thought I'd have 15 books published with #16 on the way.
ReplyDeleteLiz, I've been following your success with pleasure! Good for you!
DeleteCongratulations to you Liz!
DeleteCongratulations, Roberta! I love the passage, and assume no children were also hurt.
ReplyDeleteI also didn't know that my writing career would take off and be such a joy over the last 13 years! I wouldn't trade it for anything.
All those stories have to come out!! And how could you fail with fans like Jay rooting for you?!
DeleteNo kids, no animals hurt:). Yes you've become a writing rockstar Edith!
DeleteLove the snippet, Lucy! LOVE the photos! So cute!!
ReplyDeleteI feel like Hank--my entire life has been a surprise (although not nearly as glamorous as Hanks!) I imagined living in England, but certainly not how I ended up doing it. I never really imagined having a child--I was not one of those girls who grew up daydreaming about marriage and babies--but I'm so glad I did. I certainly never imagined that I would be a published writer!!
Oh, this is so thrilling! Love the snippet and can't wait to get back to the Keys.
ReplyDeleteCongratulations on the next book and have a terrific launch party. Wish I could hope on a plane and join the fun.
ReplyDeleteLet's see, what surprises have happened to me? Like others, I'm commenting on a blog, and others comment back to me. That is a surprise. I went to college and got my degree, that wasn't supposed to happen. And though I don't work in the field, the fact that I finished when I was always told I wasn't "smart" enough has always my little crowing song. Most recently is retiring after 21 plus years with the same company and retiring when I wanted, not being forced out by another change in management. Now if I can figure out how to go to sleep before 1am, that would be grand.
I never thought I would lose a job, but I did in the mid nineties. When I finally found permanent employment, I never expected that my coworkers would be like a second family to me. I retired from that job seven years ago, after working there for twenty-one years. I see my former coworkers all the time. We have helped each other through illness, injury, surgeries, deaths of loved ones. I’m so glad I was laid off from that previous job! I never would have found such wonderful friends.
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Lucy, this is such a great question! I just came back to read through the comments and have learned so much about everyone!
ReplyDeleteI had morning appointments that make me very late to the party today! Excellent excerpt! And kudos on your 20+ years of publishing success.
ReplyDeleteI never thought I'd have a child, but then turned into almost a stereotype in my mid-30's when my biological clock went off and I absolutely had to have a baby. I'm so grateful that I did have my son -- not only because of how much I treasure him personally, but because of how much the experience of mothering taught me about everything else in life.
Like many others have mentioned, I never thought I'd lose a job, either, but there in the early 2000's it happened to me more than once. I had always been a high achiever and a people-pleaser, and the combined effect of all that really knocked me down. But looking back, I'm convinced those experiences made me a much better human being.
Looking at your last picture, Lucy, I thought, "Yep, sand traps have killed many a good golfer." It also sent me down the rabbit hole of videos showing how best to use that dreaded sand wedge or if you might even want to use a different club. Then, there's the condition of the sand, more compacted or loose to determine how far or close you hit the sand behind the ball. Thank, I enjoyed that. One of my regrets is that I didn't keep playing golf after high school. I wasn't very good, but I did once make a hole-in-one and score the par for the golf course I played. I'm one of those few people who actually enjoy watching golf on television. Oh, and I love the pic of you in your golf gear, too. Do you still play? And, why haven't I read your golf mysteries? Are they on Kindle?
ReplyDeleteOK, I got carried away with golf. I'm indeed curious as to why there's a body outside the daycare. I enjoyed the excerpt. And, I have The Mango Murders on pre-order (I love an alliterative title).
As far as surprises in life, I don't think I want to go there now. But, there have been some good ones, too, like going to Hawaii four times.