Sunday, April 26, 2026

What We're Writing: Jenn's in Copyedit Mode

 JENN McKINLAY: One of my favorite phases of book producing is the copy edits. Hopefully when the edits arrive, enough time has passed that I've forgotten the book and can now look at it with fresh eyes. I am currently working on the edits for WITCHES OF QUESTIONABLE INTENT and I just got the cover art, which is absolutely stunning but I can't share the whole cover yet. 

I can, however, share an itty bitty piece of it and I'll share a snippet of the story so you know what the glimpse of cover refers to. 

Here's the bit of the cover:

 


So, who/what is this little fella? Here's the snippet from a scene where the protagonist Zoe is visiting a magical midnight market: 

     I glanced around Marvello’s trove of items. There were clocks, mirrors, sets of dishes, maps, lanterns and books…so many books. It was easy to see why Tariq loved Marv’s booth the most. I began to sort through the titles of books, looking for items of interest. I was reaching for a volume on a nearby shelf when a tiny flicker of flame shot out at my fingers followed by a puff of smoke.

     “Ouch!” The flame had grazed my finger but hadn’t burned me. “Marv, I don’t want to alarm you. but I think there’s a fire in your books!”

     “Oh, no!” Marv and Tariq hurried over to the shelf.

     “Right there!” I pointed. Sure enough another little lick of flame appeared.

     Marv laughed and said, “Oh, don’t worry that’s a bookwyrm hatchling.”

    Tariq noted my confusion and explained, “A baby dragon.”

    I clapped my hand against the side of my head a few times as if I was trying to dislodge water. “I’m sorry, could you repeat that because it sounded like you said a baby dragon?”

     “I did.” Tariq gestured to where Marv was moving aside books and reaching into the shelf.

     I felt my jaw drop when Marv pulled his hand out of the opening and pinched between his thumb and forefinger by the scruff of its neck was a tiny black dragon, no bigger than a baseball.

     “That’s not…you’re pranking me,” I said.

     “Hold out your hand,” Marv said. “This little fellow is named Titus. He won’t hurt you.”
     My hand shook a little bit but I held it palm up and Marv dropped the bookwyrm hatchling into it. The little fellow stretched his neck, sniffing the air between us. He was stupid cute and I desperately wanted to pet him or squeeze him, but I didn’t want to terrorize him as he was so tiny, so I didn’t do anything.

     He circled my palm, his tail twitching and his tiny leathery wings flapping, like a dog trying to settle into the best position for a nap. Once he settled, he folded up his wings and tucked in his tail. A puff of smoke came out of his tiny nose and he closed his eyes. I would have thought I was hallucinating but I could feel the pin pricks of his tiny talons on my palm, his steady heartbeat, and his slow inhale and exhale.

     “But…I don’t…isn’t it dangerous to have a little guy who emits fire near all of your books?” I asked.

     “Oh, he’s not the only one,” Marv said. “I have five bookwyrms. They eat mold and dust, and they’re fire is like witch fire where it doesn’t burn but it does clean the books quite nicely.”


This is one of those moments where I desperately wish that what I write could be real. Wouldn't it be cool to have a bookwyrm, maybe two to keep each other company, on your bookcase? 


Reds and Readers, what/who/where is something you've read in a book that you wish was real?


WITCHES OF QUESTIONABLE INTENT comes out Nov 10th. It was originally Oct 27th, so who knows if it will move again, but it'll be this autumn either way. Here's a more detailed description: 


A librarian witch must use her bookish knowledge to track down a dangerous, magical tome, in this enchanting novel from New York Times bestselling author Jenn McKinlay.

Thanks to her training as a librarian and her newfound magical abilities, Zoe Ziakas thinks she has a handle on her job at the Museum of Literature safeguarding the secret collection of enchanted tomes known as the Books of Dubious Origin. But when Jasper Griffin—the colleague she’s been crushing on—reports that their most volatile acquisition, The Book of Shadows, has been stolen, Zoe’s carefully cataloged world unravels.

This isn’t just any magical text. It carries unquestionable power, twisting truth into illusion and turning allies into enemies. Once its power is unleashed, no one can trust what they see or who they are.

To track down the book, Zoe, Jasper, and the rest of the BODO team plunge into a perilous hunt that takes them from shadowy midnight markets to demon-infested streets, all while wrangling an unpredictable hellhound puppy. But when the thief begins to invoke the book’s darkest spells, Zoe faces an impossible challenge: How does she stop a curse that can rewrite reality itself?

If she can’t separate fact from fiction, the story won’t just end—it will be erased.



28 comments:

  1. Oh, my goodness, how adorably cute . . . could I please have a bookwyrm??? Thanks for sharing this, Jenn . . . .
    Something from a book that I wish was real? A magic wand, please . . . .

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  2. I’ll take a babel fish, please! Although Apple’s Live Translate is getting pretty close.

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  3. I would love to have a bookworm (assuming they stay small. We won't have no room for an adult sized one in our apartment.) Lol

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  4. That was bookwyrm, of course. I hate autocorrect.

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  5. And there you have it, the cutest mascot to go with the slogan, “I’m not a bookworm. I’m a book dragon!”
    A real invisibility cloak like Harry Potter has would be fun to have.

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  6. Oh Jenn, I NEED a baby bookworm! They eat mold and dust and clean the books! Maybe one for downstairs and one for upstairs! How big do they get? I always loved the dragons in the Anne McCaffrey Pern books, and in “When Women Were Dragons” by Kelly Barnhill. And yes, as Brenda mentioned, an invisibility cloak…

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  7. I adore your little dragon Jenn! Your mind works in mysterious and lovely ways:)

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  8. What fun!

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  9. My youngest, the one who wrote fanfiction as a teenager, loves this kind of story. I'll have to tell her about your book when it comes out! She is turning her hand to a romantasy of her own now, too.

    Love the idea of a benevolent, housekeeping library dragon. One that could zap the stinkbugs that get in the house in fall and overwinter in the bookcases.

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  10. And, as long as we’re copy editing, it should be their, not they’re . . .

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  11. I'll be waiting to see if there will be a tiny bookwyrm in my copy when the book arrives this fall. We all get one, right?
    Jenn, I love the wonder in that passage. I love how you bring that sense of wonder into all of your stories whether you are describing cupcakes or tiny kittens.
    I'm with Joan. A magic wand and a book of spells, please.

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    1. Joan and Judy, I could have bought you a magic wand yesterday when I attended a fairytale fashion show, fairies with or without wings, young or older dressed in fantastic dresses.

      What a coincidence that Jenn tells us about her next fantasy book today :)

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  12. Love this snippet, the art work and cannot wait to read the book. Hmm, I think I'd like to be a shapeshifter. To be able to become a bird and fly somewhere and then change back to my human self or become a mountain goat and climb soaring mountains. Yep. Shapeshifter. -- Victoria

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  13. Jenn, I'm sorry, I am overwhelmed by the urge to go all fan girl on you. "Squeeee!!!" I only recently read WITCHES OF DUBIOUS ORIGIN and I feel like it was the book I had been waiting for and didn't know it. Just WOW! So now to learn that I have only until autumn to get the next installment makes me giddy. It can't come soon enough to please me!

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  14. Absolutely excellent writing and story Jenn!!

    When I read Harry Potter, he had a magical cloak or blanket that made him seem invisible to everyone. Wouldn't that be so cool to walk about - listening in on conversations and know one knows you are there.

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  15. A bookwyrm that eats mold and dust? I'll take three, please. What a fun scene, Jenn. Have fun with the copyedits.

    Stay tuned for my post here Tuesday about all the places I made up in my Cece Barton mysteries that I wish I could hang out in!

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  16. I love the picture and description of the bookwyrm. Help! I can't remember the last time I dusted my books.

    The device I want is perhaps more sci fi than magic (as in "Beam me up, Scottie), but I'd like to be able to travel any place in the world instantly and return instantly whenever I wanted, without any actual travel time. So a magic carpet wouldn't work. Can anyone think of a magic/fantasy story offering that wonderful gift? I've just started planning my next visit to friends and family all over the US with multiple flights, plus train, bus, and car trips (and I haven't even dared to check prices yet), so that's what inspired my magical wish.

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  17. A "Beam me up, Scottie" travel mode would be great! No lost luggage!

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  18. From Celia: I'm dreaming, dreaming of a tiny Chorus line of wyrms tumbling down my basement stairs to clear" all that is waiting in Maine. So much paper , drawers of metal, balls of copper wires and more. That's just the man cave.
    I would enhance their efforts with my own
    HP Room of enhancement full of terribly useful bargains.

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  19. Jenn, I love your excerpt from your next Witches of Dubious Origins novel. I just finished reading your Substack post about your book being adapted into a streaming television series.

    What have I read in a book that I wish could be real? A bookwyrm that eats dust and mold. Growing up watching reruns of Bewitched, I wished that I could magic away the bullies - make them go away! Like Celia, a HP room of enhancements full of useful bargains.

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  20. Hank Phillippi Ryan RyanApril 26, 2026 at 11:26 AM

    Your imagination is so fabulous Jenn! Love love love . I always think about the Borrowers when I wonder where things went…

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  21. I eagerly await the next book in this series.
    Add a dragon? YES, please.

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  22. Darn it! Now I want a bookwyrm. That little critter would be WELL fed.

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  23. The ability to go either back or forward in time. If you are in the past and know what is going to happen you could change the result by warning someone not to do something that led to a negative outcome. Perhaps provide a medicine that didn’t exist at that time.
    Going to the future there would be access to new discoveries that could be brought back to help people who have reached the end of what is currently available to them whether it is something life saving or just ways of making life easier.

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