Monday, May 19, 2025

Lucy Burdette Dishes on Characters


LUCY BURDETTE: (Yes, it’s what we’re writing week and I know you are expecting to see Hallie first. Hallie and I switched days this week because of my schedule, but don’t worry, she’s coming on Thursday!) 

I have lots of balls in the air, including writing the last third of Key West food critic book number 16, preparing the launch of THE MANGO MURDERS (coming August 12), and noodling about a new project while getting ready for vacation. No complaints, but it’s a lot to fit into my pea brain!

Cathy Salustri, publisher of the Gabber newspaper, and author of Florida Spectacular, recently sent me a set of questions about THE MANGO MURDERS. One asked about my habit of including real people as characters in my books. She wondered how people feel about this and whether anyone had asked to be removed. “Not yet!” I said. But that made me think that you might be interested in meeting some of the real characters who will appear in the August book.


This is my friend Ron Augustine, the man on whom LORENZO is based. He is a real tarot card reader, appearing most nights at Mallory Square. Whenever Hayley Snow is stuck, she often turns to Lorenzo. I find him to be lovely and wise and I turn to him too. (Here's a lovely article about him in one of the local papers.)



Dominique the cat man has been a fixture on Mallory Square for years, performing amazing routines with his trained housecats. After the pandemic, his trained cats retired. He still visits most nights at the Sunset Celebration and loves talking to his fans.

This is Key West Police Department Chief Sean Brandenburg. I often give him a cameo and he’s a very good sport about it, even when I mentioned a tattoo that he sports. But don’t mess with him if you’re doing something wrong—he gets very serious then!



John Martini is one of our favorite artists in Key West and a new character. I was a little worried about including him without asking first, but I *think* he’s pleased. 



Now here is a little snippet from the part of the book where Hayley visits John in his studio: 

The interior was a remarkable space, another world from what waited outside. Soaring two stories high, the wooden roof was supported by steel beams. Some of the walls were partially tiled in pale blue with brown designs, and the remainder were plain concrete, like the floor. The entire cavernous space inside was populated with larger-than-life steel figures, ranging from whimsical to grotesque Picasso-like figurines. Tiny bodies with big heads had birds perched on them. They were painted in red and yellow and scattered around the studio. Other body parts constructed of rusty steel waited for assembly. 

The place was downright freaky. I had to wonder what was going on in the mind of the artist when he designed this work.

I can’t think of anything to ask you, but please weigh in with your thoughts about mixing reality with fiction. Or even better, toss out some titles for the next book—they are due this week and I HAVE NOTHING:). Think food, key west, and murder…



If you should wish to pre-order The Mango Murders, the link is right here…


40 comments:

  1. It's difficult for me to imagine that anyone would be upset about being included as a character in one of your books . . . it's interesting to meet the "real" people on whom those characters are based.

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  2. What a fun idea to include real people as characters in your books. I'm sure they and their families are thrilled. How do you normally approach them?

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    1. Some are friends or acquaintances, the others I reach out to in person or by email.

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  3. I love that you include real people in your stories! It's fine, IMHO, to include real live characters, as long as they are doing what they would do in reality. Lorenzo reads Tarot and is wise. Perfect. It adds authenticity to your Key West stories!

    One of my favorite authors, James Benn includes lots of historical characters in his WWII mysteries. They are all accurately in their historical settings, performing their duties as they fit seamlessly into his plots. Another WWII author took a real historical figure so wildly out of context that I stopped reading the series. Maybe I'll return to it one day, but I found it jarring.

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    1. Thanks Judy. With some of the characters including Ron/Lorenzo, the stories take them far beyond real life. That's where I have to be careful!

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  4. Thanks for introducing us to the real characters! I imagine they would get upset only if they were a suspect, but maybe even then they would get a kick out of it. (I'm afraid I need subtitles for the Dominique chat - between the background noise and his accent, I missed a lot of what he said.)

    In the book I'm about to send in, I include a local man who won naming rights in a charity auction. I did make him a suspect but he doesn't end up being the murderer. I don't think he'll mind.

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    1. Titles - I'm not good at them, but you haven't used conch yet. Maybe something with that, since it evokes the Caribbean and is pronounced like "conk."

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    2. Lisa in Long BeachMay 19, 2025 at 8:50 AM

      A Conch on the Head?

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    3. Love it Lisa!!!!

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    4. That's what I'm talking about, Lisa!

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    5. Yes thanks Edith and Lisa, one of the suggestions was THE SECRET OF THE OLD CONCH, which I kind of love as a nod to Nancy Drew:)

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  5. LUCY: Thanks for sharing those videos of Ron & Dominique! I can see why you added them to be part of your Key West. And I hope artist John will enjoy you including him in your new book. Those steel figures are vivid in my mind.

    Will try to brainstorm & post some possible titles after coffee!

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  6. My thoughts: Alexander McCall Smith often includes real people like Peploe in his Scotland street novels

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  7. Christine FalconeMay 19, 2025 at 8:12 AM

    It is wonderful to find “meet” some of the characters in your books!

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  8. It's so cool to meet the real people behind Lorenzo and the famous cat man. Titles? Hmm I'll think.

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  9. LOVE to brainstorm the title! What's it about? xxx And these photos are wonderful...what an incredible place to live.

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    1. Yes it is incredible, we're very lucky. Premise: The Monroe County sheriff’s office has established a location for safe custody exchange. Hayley has been asked to accompany a young woman to pick up her daughter there. But in the chaos of the sheriff’s office animal farm open house, first the mother disappears, and then the father, leaving Hayley responsible for a little girl. And so on:)

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  10. I read this and put it aside for a bit to come back to it. Here are a few little brainstorm ideas I came up with:
    Slaying at a Sunset Soiree
    A Killer Beach Brunch
    The Final Sunset Cruise

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  11. I've read all your books and looking forward to August 12th when The Mango Murders is out.
    I've already pre-ordered from my local bookstore.
    I love the local characters and that you include them in Haley Snow's world. Because Key West is a small area it works so well - and the reader gets the feeling they are there on the island with these locals participating in their lives on the streets in Key West and they bring the community to life for the reader.
    There are many others you have written about who are real locals in Key West - like the gay couple. Can you elaborate on them as well?

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    1. Maybe Eric and Bill? they are great pals--Eric is a real psychologist, and Bill is the person who helped me with the plot line for Death on the Menu. he was a guide at the Harry Truman Little White House, which was so helpful!

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  12. Opps, sorry for the redundancy - I obviously need to edit before I send Reply.
    What is #16 about?

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    1. Premise: The Monroe County sheriff’s office has established a location for safe custody exchange. Hayley has been asked to accompany a young woman to pick up her daughter there. But in the chaos of the sheriff’s office animal farm open house, first the mother disappears, and then the father, leaving Hayley responsible for a little girl.

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  13. It's such fun to see where your characters come from, Lucy. I think as writers we're all magpies, storing away what other people do, say, their annoying (and endearing) habits, and using them in our writing, even when the whole character isn't based on that person. But mostly I think I use myself ... or some of me in many of my characters. Asking: What would "I" do in this situation.

    Having Key West as your setting is your wonderful ace the hole.

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    1. Good point Hallie, except that I am a major chicken compared to Hayley!

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  14. I've never included a real person in a book. Well, a cousin of The Hubby's did ask me to use her name once. I said sure, but with the way I write, I told her I can't guarantee she wouldn't be a bad guy. She seemed okay with that.

    Titles? Man, I have enough problems with my own so I'm no help to you there. Sorry.

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  15. How wonderful to "meet" Lorenzo and the cat man! The videos were a lovely intro and will flesh out the characters I already have established in my mind. The fact that you draw local characters into the series lends to its authenticity and your descriptions have been spot on because the real deal looks like what I have floating in my brain's "Key West" character storage. -- Victoria

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  16. I think it’s fine to use the names of real people, as long as they don’t mind.

    DebRo

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  17. your friend looks very different from how we imagined Lorenzo with dreadlocks. Why did we think Lorenzo was mixed race (with some African ancestors)?

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  18. Oh, the cover is gorgeous! I love it when authors mix real folks into their series. It's like discovering the unexpected cherry inside the chocolate.

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  19. love the snippet and I like know the inspiration to your characters.

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  20. Interesting, Lucy, and always glad to “visit” Key West in photos and words on the Jungle Reds and, in fiction in your books. And until your FB post today, I didn’t know that there was a particular order on “What we’re writing” week. Elisabeth

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  21. How fun to meet Lorenzo and Dominique, and to hear their actual voices! Thanks for sharing all the photos and video clips, Lucy. I was surprised at Dominique's accent, but duh! Of course he's French.

    Titles:

    Conched Out
    Sunset Murder
    Green Flash Crime/Mystery/Murder

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  22. Since you mentioned the newest book is about a baby left with the police and then both parents disappear, maybe something along the lines of a children's song or book title:
    How I Wonder Where You Are, Hush Little Baby, Goodnight & Don't Let the Bed Buys Bite, Goodnight Moon Over Key West,

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